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5 years 2 months ago #244971 by PBR Street Gang
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Hi All

Just finishing of the MR.

Before I do, could any one kindly give me some last minute help?

1 - Is it worth mentioning the fact that the HP was late, and described for example
X as being thin instead of big.

2 - Should I also mention spelling errors repeated over in the PA4.

3 - Can I say that the AR1 may have been inaccurate due to someone else filling it in,
and they did not have the skills resources or guidance at the time.

4 - And finally should I present the descriptors first then these items from
above as well reference new evidence (mobility report) for Bus Pass at the end
of an attached documents.

Thank you all for your, patience guidance and expertise in the past few days!!

Any last minute tips also welcomed!

Regards and very best wishes to you all - Paul.

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5 years 2 months ago #244990 by Gordon
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PBR

1. No and Yes.

2. No, you are distracting the DM from looking at the issues that will get you an award.

3. You can but it was your responsibility to ensure that the form was correctly completed.

4. DMs have a limited attention span so present the important information first, I would do a summary and then a more detailed response.

Gordon

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5 years 2 months ago #245001 by PBR Street Gang
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Hi Gordon

Thank for you response and expertise.

What I will do is a brief summary (half a page) at the beginning, of the new evidence and report.
Then I will go straight to the descriptors, in the detail that was not in the AR1.
The rest of it I will leave at the end with a summary.. What do you think?

Many thanks in advance - Paul

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