It's not necessary to go into great detail on a GL24, a simple statement that you do not believe that the Decision Maker has taken full account of your needs, further evidence to follow is sufficient.
Further evidence can be sent at a later date as it will be quite a while before your appeal will be heard. See
Delays in hearing DLA & ESA Appeals
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